Hi. I saw you on the forums... you're sadly correct about the lack of appreciation for decent writing on this site. I'm now going to have a look through your stuff; but may I recommend having a look at a club I'm part of? It's a good way of meeting people who'll give actual critique and so on.

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...and you can consider that the end of the matter.

thanks for the comment.

it's good to have critique no matter how harsh, as long as if it's with good reason. I'm used to getting 'thats rubbish' or 'thats good' with no real reason.
I'm still learning, and hoping to pick up skills along the way. The intro i posted isnt fully defined if you know what i mean.

Oh, and don't be sorry, you did exactly what i wanted

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Hello ~ Welcome to dA and thanks for the page visit <3

Umm... Not all to sure what to say. i'll be sure to check out your writing sometime! (when i'm not falling asleep)

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